When I dream I see
Auroras in your eyes;
Staving off my melancholy -
Lighting up the skies…
The sparkle of your soul
Is glaring back at me;
My one and only goal -
With you once more to be…
As the light wash over me
I drift away with you;
Holding on for eternity -
For something that is new…
And for the audio-philes:
GFB wrote @
like this 
“When I dream I see
Auroras in your eyes;
Staving off my melancholy -”
“auroras”…think this is so cool… well done!
tashtoo wrote @
Wow! wow! Love the music! Perfect accompaniment for the words. Yay! You’ve made this wanna-be poet quite happy with your presentation. Thank you! and Happy OpenLinkNight of course. (just one small thing…should light in the third stanza have an ‘s’?) You can slap me if you like…but it just lent a bit of a bump to the read…or perhaps you could add ‘es’ to wash? Whoops…sorry…did it again!
Francois Bergh wrote @
Grammar nazi, eh 
To clarify, this light is so overwhelming that in my mind it counts as all the light in the world… thus becoming plural simply by poetic license 
Thank you for your comment, feedback like this is more than welcome.
tashtoo wrote @
Perfect! I like poetic license And again…not something I often do.,..but this was awesome!
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